Can someone help me with my magic the gathering deck?

You may be running too many land... maybe take out 4 land and put in some more mana acceleration. Also I realize you may not have the cards right now, but it's best to run 4 copies of the cards you most want to find. I live in CA too, if you want to shoot me an e-mail and let me know what part you're in I might be able to help you find places to play. Also, try meetup.com.